NotBob's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[API Pong]

Not so bad...

I liked it. 4/5 but the only major problem is the music. If you want an atmosphere of "Good old Fashioned"-ness you need retro music. Something 8-bit. Also i would have liked the "pong" noise when the ball hit the paddles. It may have been in there, but the music drowned it out.
All in all it's a nice game (better than i could make for sure), so so let the hate the guy before spewed get you down.

[Eye lag test]

neato

why dont you try out some more eye tricks. oh and music would be nice

[Psychological Types]

good, but a few things...

You might want to create a larger hit state for your buttons. also I noticed that movement seemed too slow. To fix the second problem, simply increase the frame rate.
Aside from the technical issues, you did a good job. I would have liked more questions though. 4/5

sorry about the 0 for sound, but my speakers were off.

[Castle Draw]

Uber good

Great, just great. 5/5

[Falling TxZam]

Wow!

This is pretty darn good. It would be nice if you could add some more sound effects and a better TxZam, but this is a nice piece of work. 5/5

[Mouse Evader]

uber hard!

but it is still good 5/5. i put 0 on the sound because my speakers are out

Sebby64 responds:

Thanks

[SuPuzzle]

oh, that puzzle

We did that in class. No one can do it without folding the paper. still, 3/5 for a very good version of the game

[Dress up s.p. deluxe]

pretty good.

The only thing i noticed is the hair covered the hats

[Graphical Text Adventure]

A bit longer....

Its nice to see an adventure game of this sort and the music was great.
ok, for serious stuff
-Make longer
-lots of stuff to read. could you make a memo pad that writes what you read?
-make more stuff actionable, like opening drawers
-sometimes the movement buttons are confusing
-the graphics are a bit poor, but i guess this is just a test game so its ok
-bring items into it

kitty-and-meander responds:

Well... Movement buttons have always been confusing in text adventures... So theres not much I can really do about that, Opening drawers, I'll put that in just for you. And a memo pad, that is a great idea, I'll definatley use that one. Thanks for the review!